Ch-Check it out (Mr. Littlejeans remix)

[Mr. Littlejeans]

Howdy all, I have been messing with making beats for about 5 years now, and I've finally decided to get some out for people to hear. For your listening/critiquing, I submit my remix of "Ch-Check it out":

Ch-Check it out (Mr. Littlejeans remix) (http://www.soundclick.com/mrlittlejeansmusic.htm)

I used an altered version of an instrumental I already had... I would appreciate feedback, cause this is my first remix!

Thanks

[landos_dad]

Hmm, I'm not sure your beat matches up correctly. Needs variation.
Sorry, but it didn't sit right with me.
Just my honest opinion. Don't give up.

[Uru-Nitro]

I think it's offtempo... or in a tempo that I can't catch.
but the beats doesn't sound bad at all dude (y)

[Nick Jade]

yeah, check it out's lyrics starts a little late. that may have thrown you off.

[Mr. Littlejeans]

Ok, you guys confirmed what I suspected... was it off the whole way? I was a bit iffy on it after the first chorus, cause the flows get a bit wacky... does the beatboxing on the chorus work?

Thanks again for your feedback, I'll do my best to fix it up and make it work!

[Nick Jade]

the song is 115 bmp, if that helps at all.

[DeeJayZap]

Not bad (y)

[Mr. Littlejeans]

the song is 115 bmp, if that helps at all.
That actually helps greatly, as I had things clocked at 110. Thanks!