View Full Version : Lets write a poem/freestyle together!
dublirie04
07-23-2005, 09:30 PM
Alright, I will start, I am bored and need some way to release my creative energy.
I am a nice lady from the midwest scene
who engages in hobbies like dj'in and smokin the green
I try to live consciously and openminded
spreadin love to all who know how to forever be a kid
maybe this little beginning will spark your flow
spit about stuff even if about it you dont know
Bitchamachacha
07-23-2005, 09:32 PM
My, dear.
jennyb
07-23-2005, 09:37 PM
never fear...
we've got that good shit spillin in your ear.
(?)
dublirie04
07-23-2005, 09:39 PM
wheather your white, black, yellow, red or asian, let me shout out to the whole nation.
its about unity and togetherness, this poem we will bless with out sentiments that spill out out minds, just give me a little bit of time
and I will continue to mesmorize you with my rhymes.
dublirie04
07-23-2005, 10:06 PM
you should have made the cookies with the crypt
that is the cronic
that is the hypnotic
that is not the booger plague so bubonic
anyways, I would still eat your cookin cause you took the time to contribute
and maybe you are good lookin
fiction, keep it real and I would like to hear your comedic word deal---ings
from ends on back to the beginnins. Word
dublirie04
07-23-2005, 11:01 PM
Hope you're not fakin bout your brillant bakin cause in my kitchen there will be no belly achin
You eat what I prepare and enjoy the vibe and the atmosphere
You give thanks for what is cookin
whether you are butt as ugly or straight good lookin
whether you are thin or phat, we rock this easy bake oven right when the beat drops.
ScarySquirrel
07-23-2005, 11:14 PM
I don't know about y'all but I think some of this is corny
All makin' silly rhymes about food and being horny.
Yo, get your dick out your hand and stop this stupid shit
it's about twenty to one and I'm not havin' it.
Go walk down the street and possibly meet a person,
get something done on that lesson you should be learnin'
If hooking up is what you aim to do
then find some place better than the internet to screw.
dublirie04
07-23-2005, 11:21 PM
Yo, AW, it not all about that
I agree that this poem is a little whack
but for you to proceed with your opinion has set it on another page
and like you know its rainin here so I am not about to hit the streets to rage
I didn't know you busted wicked raps, did you learn that from your grandma or grand paps, cause it is kinda slow and tired and if you disagree with this thread, start a new one or just retire
No intention to diss you if you think thats what I am about
as a matter of fact I have been missin talkin to you so give me a shout
and come to chill and we'll share some records or beverages
or just rap about this summer of heat thats got me sweatin
Keep on flowin kids if its what you are knowin
paul jones
07-24-2005, 10:13 AM
fuckin hell!!!!!!!!!!!I've been waiting for the phone call to go to the pub now for 40 mins
fuckin hells bells!
it's 'cos one of my friends' has 'visitors'
fuckin 'visitors' are always delaying everything!
remember when you had relative 'visitors' when you were a kid
you just wanted them to fuck off but they outstayed their intended time
bastards!
C'mon! I need a beer!
Ferdinand_2
07-24-2005, 03:57 PM
LOL One friend try to make this in the messenger with me but I make shit
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