My First Beat!!!!!!

[Subculture]

Tell me what u think.........

Thanks.

http://s48.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0A4CSPNKNDWL933GHOILPGDASP

(y) or (n)

http://s48.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1DXPODKQO0JYC0BYC6ZEEY9ER1

(y) or (n)

[abcdefz]

...did you just get a program? What are you using?

I liked some of the background touches you did. (y)

[Subculture]

actually its just cool edit pro and Fruity Loops. Im just getting started with those programs but Im saving for an MPC right now and I'll start using that as well as a keyboard.

Thanks for the comments.

[abcdefz]

Have fun! (y)

[Subculture]

thanks :)

[Subculture]

http://s56.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2P9AD6TT1NS233B7AZHNI6WXJ7

heres another one..........

feedback please!!!!

im new to this i need all the constructive criticism i can get

[mickill]

The "piano" one is the best one, but that exact Isaac Hayes/Ike's Mood sample was flipped on the first Lox album already. I liked it, though.

The "jazz" one was kinda boring to be honest.

The "aretha" one is decent, but you might wanna change it up here and there. It's kinda redundant. I'm not a big fan of the sped up soul samples anymore either. I think it's time to move on.

[Subculture]

Thanks for the feedback.

anymore?

[KingSpanner]

The thing about using Fruity Loops is to make the beats sound un-fruity loopsy. I love the piano loop a lot, but I hate the kick and snare. Go download or record some fresher sounding beats, cut them up, and use those. Preset wavs are just no good

[Subculture]

^
yea most people tell me to change the snare. Thats what Im doing now. Im still workin on this so nothing is written in stone. Im trying....thanks again

[So Ruff]

The thing about using Fruity Loops is to make the beats sound un-fruity loopsy. I love the piano loop a lot, but I hate the kick and snare. Go download or record some fresher sounding beats, cut them up, and use those. Preset wavs are just no good

I was going to say something simliar, the HipHop pack drums don't sound too great. Otherwise the beats are nice. (y)

Actually there are some decent drum sounds packaged with FL if you look hard enough. Peep the RealDrumkits pack - some better drums in there. RD_Snare_9 kicks ass.

[Subculture]

cool. Thanks Im downloading sum new drums as we speak.

[Monsieur Decuts]

find your drums on vinyl idiots..otherwise its just tooo easy

[Subculture]

^

uhhh

thanks