Rawr
03-06-2006, 05:32 PM
i just wrote this, im still trying to figure out what the main character is gonna be like, its a duck.. kind of similar to Duckman (you know, the really mean chartoon dude?) but im thinking i'll make this duck.. a guy, who dresses up as a girl all the time and wears as much makeup as a slut but you can still notice its a guy, i forget what you call those type of people..i keep thinking its hermaphrodite but it aint lol so i just call it Herm duck right now.
but i was wondering, imagine your reading a comic.. would you find this funny?:
herm ducks freind -yet not created. "so whats your plan?"
"im gonna go on the blind date, apparently this lady is really sexy. im gonna make out with the woman on this blind date basicaly, then leave before she gets to ask my phone number."
herm duck goes to the dark bar.
"Heyy"
-pitch black, only eyes are shown and silver for the bodys outline.
herm duck starts making out with the lady, herm duck is aroused.
herm duck and lady scrambel to the restroom, and well.. you know the rest.
clock is shown- 2 hours later..
herm duck thoughts: "I might as well take one look."
herm duck flipes on the light switch.
herm duck turns to face woman.
-only herm duck face is now shown, its in pure parawell shock
the next shows the lady looking similar to herm duck. her mouth is wide open in shock.
herm duck yells "MOM!!"
but i was wondering, imagine your reading a comic.. would you find this funny?:
herm ducks freind -yet not created. "so whats your plan?"
"im gonna go on the blind date, apparently this lady is really sexy. im gonna make out with the woman on this blind date basicaly, then leave before she gets to ask my phone number."
herm duck goes to the dark bar.
"Heyy"
-pitch black, only eyes are shown and silver for the bodys outline.
herm duck starts making out with the lady, herm duck is aroused.
herm duck and lady scrambel to the restroom, and well.. you know the rest.
clock is shown- 2 hours later..
herm duck thoughts: "I might as well take one look."
herm duck flipes on the light switch.
herm duck turns to face woman.
-only herm duck face is now shown, its in pure parawell shock
the next shows the lady looking similar to herm duck. her mouth is wide open in shock.
herm duck yells "MOM!!"