A poem

[cookiepuss]

By Britany Spears

Remembrance of Who I Am

No more chains
That you gave me.

Enough of pain
Now I'm craving
Something sweet, so delight
How do you stand sleeping at night?

Silly patterns that we follow
You pull me in
I'm being swallowed.
By the ones you think you love
They pull you down
You can't see up above.

Manipulation is the key
They screw it in
Because you're naïve.

You come to me now
Why do you bother?
Remember the Bible
Sins of the Father.
What you do
You pass down.
No wonder why
I lost my crown.

You don't see me now
You ask yourself why
My crown is back
And it's way too high
For you to be in my presence
Especially my son
You should bow down
I've only just begun.

The guilt you fed me
Made me weak.
The voodoo you did
I couldn't speak.

You're awakening
The phone is ringing.
Resurrection of my soul
The fear I'm bringing.

What will you say
And what will you do?
She's not the same person that you're used to.

You trick me one (sic), twice, now it's three.
Look who's smiling now
Damn, it's good to be me!
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Wow. deep.


:rolleyes:

you think maybe she finally figured out she married a loser?

[cookiepuss]

dude you all need to bow down to this poem! she's only just begun!

Can you imagine if a 1,000 years from now, after the appocolypse, and the mutant people find this poem and like think she was the best poet of our time? how sad would that be?







I know you don't care.


I'm bored. I guess I'll go back to eating lunch now.:o

[cosmo105]

is that from her site or something?


it's intense.

p.s. Britney

edit: ah, it is from her site. the pic of her flipping off the camera with her homegirls...it's just too classic white trash girl. pffft.

[alexandra]

dunno if she completely wrote that on her own, but it's not too bad.

i think she's pretty aware of what's bluff in her life and what's not, yet she keeps going.

[cookiepuss]

is that from her site or something?


it's intense.

p.s. Britney


oh snap I mispelled the b-meisters Name.:o

Apparently it is from her website. but because this is America where we make a big deal out of celebrities taking a crap at a gas station...there was an entire "news" article on it on MSNBC.

I weep for this country.

[King of Rock $]

I like the stanza, rhyme scheme, meter, assonance, alliteration, incantatory effects, and poetic diction of this poem.

[paul jones]

My name is Paris Hilton
I've gots lots of money
and crabs

[cookiepuss]

That's Beautiful Paul!

I'm hoping Paris and Brit, Lynsey lohan and Jessica Simpson all write poetry and put out a big book of verses for us all to enjoy and perhaps use to teach retarded highschool kids how to read. that would be special.

[paul jones]

My name is Lindsay Lohan
I look like a skeleton
I wonder if I'm famous
In Uzbekestan

[King of Rock $]

Everything was fine and dandy until you put lindsay lohan's name in this...

She's beatiful I don't care if she's got shit for brains

[cookiepuss]

Everything was fine and dandy until you put lindsay lohan's name in this...

She's beatiful I don't care if she's got shit for brains

oh well then you won't want to visit my myspace page. cause i have a section where you doodle on all 4 of them. ;)


(I think Lohan is pretty though. she annoys me the least out of all of them.)

[TurdBerglar]

there's this vid of this dude with paris hilton at his side insulting lindsay lohan outside of a club or something surrounded by paperazi. the shit he says is hilarious.


"lindsay lohan has an orange vagina that smells like diarrhea!"
"seriously it's orange!"

among other comments

it's just so random (y)



now that guy is a poet

[monkey]

fabulous! wonderful!

you know, there are MILLIONS OF GIRLS out there right now that think britney spears should be poet laureate.