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Rawr
09-28-2006, 04:27 PM
Even though it isn't current it still seems like it is and it's the only thing I felt was important to speak up about.
So I need some opinons, is it bad or good? sorry if it's so stupid its an offense.



On September 11th all around New York, people glared at their TV's and listened to their radios, shock, despair, fear and sorrow painted their expressions, patriotic tears rolling down from their fearful eyes as many rushed to the nearest phone to call their loved ones, thousands of horrific thoughts rushing through many minds like an adrenalin driven hummingbird. The news had reported flight 93 just crashed into one of the twin towers of the World Trade Center.

Over where the terror was happening, citizens ran as the black smoke invaded their lungs, as they try to out run the terror and the tower that was crashing down before them. Fire fighters struggled to get up the flights of stairs as they stop and try to guide people out of the hell hole. Some people couldn’t even try to walk down the stairs anymore as they stopped in paralyses and trembled in fear and exhaustion with only one response of sobs and cries, shaking their heads and saying they wouldn’t make it out alive and to go on without them.

(CONTINUE; <I havent figured out what to say here..)

Many family members, friends, workers, lovers lost their lives on that, beyond ‘tragic’ day. But it would be an offence to just call them ‘people’, they were the souls and spirit’s of New York and shall never be forgotten.

b i o n i c
09-28-2006, 04:29 PM
do a search for 9/11 on here and just plagerize the bbmb. good job so far (y)

ericlee
09-28-2006, 04:41 PM
flight 93 was the one that crashed in Pennsylvania and was the only one that didn't hit it's target. FYI

Rawr
09-28-2006, 04:45 PM
sorry, was it flight 11? obviously you can see I'm not exactly sure of the flight numbers..

Rawr
09-28-2006, 04:47 PM
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Rawr
09-28-2006, 04:47 PM
gahhh, repeated post!

ericlee
09-28-2006, 04:50 PM
yeah, flight 11 was the first and then 175 hit the south tower

YoungRemy
09-28-2006, 04:57 PM
what's the assignment?

are you supposed to be painting a picture of what the atmosphere was like on 9/11? if so, you are doing a good job so far...

or are you supposed to cover the story like a journalist would- in this case you might want to include more details, FACTS...

I would suggest giving a timeline of the days actual events...

when I think of that day it is in terms of catastrophic events overlapping in time to create a feeling of confusion, frustration, and chaos...

ex.- plane 1 reported hijacked, tower 1 hit, plane 2 reported hijacked, tower 2 hit, pentagon hit by plane 3, tower 1 down, plane 4 down in PA, tower 2 down, etc etc etc.