Well?

[Waus]

A friend of mine has been learning guitar for a while and he came up with a song this afternoon. I was over, and he asked me to write some lyrics for it while I was there. I know it's not the same without the music - but what do you think?

my friends dad
used to talk about college
what a great time he had
what a wealth of knowledge
his liver went bad
and he told his only son
now he's never sad
because he keeps himself numb

oh father
he keeps himself numb

I fell in love with a girl
who liked TV and movies
she used to make them her world
she says no one even sees me
I saw her white as a pearl
with her veins all bleeding
now a coffin has her curls
and she haunts my feeling

oh girl
she haunts my feeling

[Kid Presentable]

Show me the tablature.

[Waus]

I don't have it, it's at his apartment.

[Kid Presentable]

I like the lyrics, but perhaps their impact is lost without knowing the situation/hearing the music.