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[ericlee]

It's called damn, the sun is up.....

I've got rooftops instead of mountain tops
I've got streets flatulating rather than dogs defecating
While his owner keeps walking as his canine leaves a racetrack line as he's
writing rip was here squatting/ walking in the middle of the silent road...

I've got an asteroid rocket spiral downfall flaming while I've got a pointy hat with cultivated Zhejiang Province (http://www.green-tea-store.com/map/zhejiang/zhejiang.html) rows.

And all this time, this redhead was listening to me
While she looked to the sky
Greenish blue eyes with the yellow around the holes
With cuts on her cheeks and eyebrows...

I've got satellite dishes instead of people casting for fishes
at the bay on the end of Lockwood Road. (http://www.portclinton.org/pclodging.html)

A five piece suit, a pinstriped tie, the silver hair and one leg crossed over the other.....

You may recognize this song. In due time cause 这是神的意志。 (http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr)

Prease stand by while you're poll options are being generated...
Just hit the fuckin backspace button if it takes too long..
Thank you and have a good morning, night, lunch, brunch, takeout, or dinner, breakfast....

[roosta]

i dont understand the poll options :confused:

[Jadge Fucking 1]

brutal.

[Otis Driftwood]

Wow, just, wow...

[ericlee]

i dont understand the poll options :confused:

number one- hell yeah, good lyrics
number two- they may grow on me, they may not
number three- I'll have to wait to hear a sample with music before I judge anything.
number four- self explanatory

[Jadge Fucking 1]

you should bawk it like the chief from the jesus lizard

[ericlee]

you should bawk it like the chief from the jesus lizard

Damn that fucker is nuts. Saw them at Sudsy Malones (http://www.myspace.com/sudsys) one night while washing a pair of socks camped out on a washing machine. One of the best shows I've seen there. I left half of my cerebrum there that night.

[ericlee]

Here's an old one that I've resurrected. Never finished it, it's still in the works. Give it some time cause it's gonna rip.

It's called First of the Ninth..

Upturned palms
Whirly wisps by, leaving dust filtering in the air while in the background
Flames are engulfed by the smoke...

But yet it's the most beauteous thing I've ever seen
This is how it feels to live inside my dreams
And I know, this isn't the end...

It's not as I've chosen this
But I've got no voice in this
It's just do as I'm told and drive on...

Landing first step into the shit
Railroad tracks on my kevlar and what the fuck did you
Salute me for, thanks for the sniper check
You damn green waste I should make you drop and give me one hundred and fifty...

Any man who's brave enough shall quench his thirst with no damn question
Because of the display of bravery..
Man on his back holding his intestines one hand, and pointing skyward with the other
Was the suggestion from a man who's earned his spurs (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Order_of_the_Spur)
and he'll wear his stetson while deep in the shit cause he's a
bad stogie smoking mother fucker
With the silver oak leaf cluster..

Eh, just wait for it. Like i said, it's gettin there.

[ericlee]

Here's an old one that I've resurrected. Never finished it, it's still in the works. Give it some time cause it's gonna rip.

It's called First of the Ninth..

Upturned palms
Whirly wisps by, leaving dust filtering in the air while in the background
Flames are engulfed by the smoke...

But yet it's the most beauteous thing I've ever seen
This is how it feels to live inside my dreams
And I know, this isn't the end...

It's not as I've chosen this
But I've got no voice in this
It's just do as I'm told and drive on...

Landing first step into the shit
Railroad tracks on my kevlar and what the fuck did you
Salute me for, thanks for the sniper check
You damn green waste I should make you drop and give me one hundred and fifty...

Any man who's brave enough shall quench his thirst with no damn question
Because of the display of bravery..
Man on his back holding his intestines one hand, and pointing skyward with the other
Was the suggestion from a man who's earned his spurs (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Order_of_the_Spur)
and he'll wear his stetson while deep in the shit cause he's a
bad stogie smoking mother fucker
With the silver oak leaf cluster..

Eh, just wait for it. Like i said, it's gettin there.

part 2-

Hovering low in our heuys blaring a symphony
With blue arrows blazing
My henchmen locking and loading
About to watch your town explode....

But no matter what you tell me
Nothin's going to change that feeling of
Knowing this isn't going to end...

Because that upturned palm tree line,
Glistening water below the bridge
Trail of the slithering moonlight as it serpentines with the ravines rippled motion as
Fireworks brought light to the blackened air
Will never depreciate in it's beauty.....

Having a sauce specialist is always a plus to have by your side
When your body yearns for some scrumptious nourishment
To keep you on your toes deep in the bush.....

Except for his becoming unhinged because he didn't ask for this
After he faced his first reality check
Due to our intrusion of the turf of that ferocious feline
Who showed his presence with a glowing streak of fading orange
And a heart sinking thunderous roar
It didn't have to tell him twice
All he ever wanted to do was prepare exquisite meals...

He didn't ask for none of this, just do as told and drive on...

Edit: new addition

Subdued by a can of beer
A plate of meat in a room with a white shirt in wearing a black tie
And on the wall an elk's head on a mantle
With a full bird and three stars
Who'd I better not say the wrong words to cause
Their brass built trains are far more superior than my tracks...

Oh how I've yearned for this
Ceiling fans reminding me of the whirlies
As they drift away and into my brain...

Still the fires, as they burned through the night
Unconsciously desperate to go back to the jungle and boogie...

[ericlee]

Whoa, I'm carving some good shreds for this.

/neck hairs standing

[ericlee]

This is actually done in real time progress of me thinking and writing more ideas and music for it...

It's a real treat. I'm glad I've resurrected that song. It was in the workings with my old band but I just now digged it up because we never really did anything with it. Now's the time to.

[Lo_Lyfe]

Whoa, I'm carving some good shreds for this.

/neck hairs standing

What?

[ericlee]

What?

writing guitar riffs for it as I go along.

Sorry, it was just jibberish.

[ericlee]

Bumpdidely upmp