My New Song (Fitted Hat Low) (Only 1 Verse)

[Lex Diamonds]

I got my fitted hat low, block 'em out
Block 'em out
I got my hater blockers on, block 'em out
Block 'em out

I got my fitted hat on my face

Why you all up in my space

I don't want these haters all in my grill so I cop me some brand new shades


I wear a mean dark pair of shades
And you can't see my eyes unless my head bent
It's about to be a cold winter, I'm on some shit
Show you how to rob the industry like 50 cent
Hopped on the airplane, hit Miami quick
Linked up with Scott Storch, so you know it's a hit
Everybody lookin for me like where Pad went?
Going going going gone, I'm outta here bitch
Look at shorty over there, she thick like quick
But she got her breasts done, she thinks she slick
Yeah, all the girls with the real hair
Yeah, the real chest and the ill rear
Even if it ain't real, I ain't hating on it
Uh! It's still yours cause you paid for it
Get your weight up not your hate up and see me after you got it up
I'm clockin ya, Versace shades watchin ya

[insertnamehere]

i have to wear a fitted hat for work i dont really like it cause theres not a hole through which to pull a pony tail

i didnt read your song too many words

[AceFace]

i love it!

i wanna use this for my siggie! it's amazing! may i?

" Yeah, all the girls with the real hair
Yeah, the real chest and the ill rear"

[insertnamehere]

ok, i read it. arent you english? why are you tryin to sound like american black people? also the hook seems like the kind of thing that would work and that people would say over and over and over again until i want to stab them in the face. i mean that in a good way, you know, like the people that listen to that kind of thing would like it. like poppin poppin my collar. but the whole last part doesnt flow very well, it seems like many of the couplets have varying numbers of beats and syllables. maybe im just reading it wrong in my head.

[AceFace]

ok, i read it. arent you english? why are you tryin to sound like american black people?

ok, this is so effing racist/idiotic. i can't keep quiet.

he sounds HIP HOP. there's plenty of black Americans that don't use that lingo. and there's plenty of white Americans that do use that lingo. and there's plenty of people in other countries that are a little bit hip hop and use that lingo.

stop with the racial and social generalizations, PLEASE.

[insertnamehere]

sorry, i think calling sunglasses hater blockers is retarded. i enjoy the occasional rap music and have incorporated into my vocabulary some slang popularized by hip hop culture, but this is like, he's trying to sound like a thug. i know not every black person talks that way and that some white people do, but most generalizations come from somewhere right? i wasn't trying to bring up a debate on social and cultural matters, i assume he posted this to get some constructive criticism, and im saying things about it that i personally don't like. i meant no offense to paddy or any one of any race.

[insertnamehere]

also, i dont know paddy's socio-economic background, but in general when someone tries to talk like that who hasnt lived in a certain environment, i guess an environment of being surrounded by hip hop or what have you, they sound pretty awkward and lame.

[AceFace]

i betcha there are plenty of hip hop writers that don't fit the mold. they may not rap the lyrics, but i bet there's straight laced people writing some of that crap that people love.

but we are both entitled to our opinion and i certainly am not hating on ya.

[insertnamehere]

that crap that people love.

i agree with you that most popular rap music is crap.

if i walked around using british slang woudln't i sound silly? its the same kind of principle. nothing racist.

also, if you were thinking that i discriminate against non-african americans rapping, i'd suggest you scoll to the top of the screen.

[AceFace]

no no. i wasn't saying that. i was just saying that you should think before you type. you might not have meant what you said, but i sure did come out sounding BAD.

[AceFace]

also, my husband lived in england for quite awhile and he still uses brittish slang and it's cute as hell. :)

[insertnamehere]

he lived in england. that makes it ok.

[TimDoolan]

Oh well I liked it. Here's mine, I was thinking Lil Wayne...


Can't wear a fitted hat, I got a big head
but i still go shopping with my baby like KFed
I'm at the mall so much they call me Brodie
Got so many jersy's I might be a bulls roadie
I wear the Oakley juliets well,
call me cyclops.
Pretty as James Marsden, clean with my hi-tops
When the weight of the world is hanging on me like a sith lord
I turn my thoughts to the B boy message board
there's low stress, its never ever borin'
no hate, I keep away from the political forum

[ericlee]

I lost my fitted hat
at the laundry mat
I'm takin a runny shit
It went sploosh sploosh spat

[roosta]

I gotta big cowboy hat, better known as stetson
You dont wanna fuck with it, ya better step son
The fuck back from my ten gallon hat
And my six shooter which goes rat-a-tat-tat
Im a lone ranger, always in danger
Kinda like Shane cuz im a bit of a stranger
I walk in the saloon, through those little swingy doors
And shoot motherfuckers for cuttin up whores
Fuck Gene Hackman, im the big hat man
Rollin with Morgan F, my main fucking black man

Peace

[Lex Diamonds]

OK, here's the finished song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDHHrClot94

[TimDoolan]

Got alvin and the chipmunks doin background vocals, tight

[insertnamehere]

Oh well I liked it. Here's mine, I was thinking Lil Wayne...


Can't wear a fitted hat, I got a big head
but i still go shopping with my baby like KFed
I'm at the mall so much they call me Brodie
Got so many jersy's I might be a bulls roadie
I wear the Oakley juliets well,
call me cyclops.
Pretty as James Marsden, clean with my hi-tops
When the weight of the world is hanging on me like a sith lord
I turn my thoughts to the B boy message board
there's low stress, its never ever borin'
no hate, I keep away from the political forum

i approve of this

[Randetica]

OK, here's the finished song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDHHrClot94

haha

oh paddy, you tease!

[Randetica]

no no. i wasn't saying that. i was just saying that you should think before you type. you might not have meant what you said, but i sure did come out sounding BAD.

only for your ears

[AceFace]

or only for my eyes?

[Randetica]

or only for my eyes?

sounding = ears!

[afronaut]

ok, this is so effing racist/idiotic. i can't keep quiet.

he sounds HIP HOP. there's plenty of black Americans that don't use that lingo. and there's plenty of white Americans that do use that lingo. and there's plenty of people in other countries that are a little bit hip hop and use that lingo.

stop with the racial and social generalizations, PLEASE.

it does sound pretty negroid though. imho.

[Videodrome]

I'm clockin ya, Versace shades watchin ya

:eek:

[AceFace]

sounding = ears!

;)