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Dorothy Wood
09-13-2008, 03:14 AM
what a shame. I'm trying to write a piece on a song for a thing and I hate my writing. I hate it here, I hate it there, everything sounds so melodramatic. I can't put my finger on it, but I am unable to express myself fully and competently and my deadline has passed already.
maybe I'm just too stoney baloney.
pls show me some good music writing and I will just copy it.
whoops, I did it again.
I played with your heart
I forget the rest...
I'm sure you can beat that.
Dorothy Wood
09-13-2008, 03:21 AM
no no, I'm not writing a song. I meant writing ABOUT music.
MY EYEBALLS
taquitos
09-13-2008, 03:23 AM
mark prindle is an asshole and this link is a joke because he sucks at writing (or does he?) (http://www.markprindle.com/)
mate_spawn_die
09-13-2008, 03:41 AM
We land in barren fields
On the Arizona plains
The insemination of little girls
In the middle of wet dreams
We are the angel mutants
The streets for us seduction
Our 'cause unjust and ancient
In this B film born invasion
Teenagers from Mars
And we don't care
Well, we've seen your 3-D movies
In violent abduction
We blast your mindless structure
Inferior connection
We take your weak resistance
Throw it in your face
We need no introduction
For mass annihilation
Teenagers from Mars
And we don't care
taquitos
09-13-2008, 03:47 AM
she walked out with empty arms
machine gun in her hand
she is good and she is bad
no one understands
she walked in in silence
never spoke a word
she's got a rich daddy
she's her daddy's girl
she loves naked sin
he loves evil sex
she has lost control
they are growing old
she will hide in silence
then her day will come
she was virgin vixen
she is on the run...
mate_spawn_die
09-13-2008, 03:52 AM
Black dress moves in a blue movie
Graverobbers from outer space
Well, your pulmonary trembles in your outstretched arm
Tremble so wicked
Two inch nails
Micro waist
With a pale white feline face
Inclination eyebrows to there
Mistress to the horror kid
Cemetary of the white love ghoul, well
Take off your shabby dress
Come and lay beside me
Come a little bit closer
Vampira...
taquitos
09-13-2008, 03:55 AM
(you) you don't go in the bathroom with me.
mate_spawn_die
09-13-2008, 04:03 AM
i ain't no goddamn son of a bitch. you better think about baby.
mikizee
09-13-2008, 06:06 AM
Just leave it alone
No pressure if you need it to grow
Its the bluechip dick mean it stay big
Too much drink mean it awesome
Bring forth and fill them out, fill them up fill them in
Let em know that they effing with a Stephen King dingaling!
Even the lord dont want none
Creepin round the darkness playing with a shotgun
But believe nothin's sawn off
As a kid I coulda swung it at the minister to ward him off
Keep him away, keep evil at bay with it
Fuckin up my fengshui but keepin off the rain with it!
You aint gotta lie, cos I can see it in your face
Quit complainin and say it, your scared of the dick, no shit me too!
Its big!
Its large!
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