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beastieboysbaby
11-03-2009, 10:18 PM
Insight. (http://poeticinsanity.tumblr.com/post/190068463/insight)

You elegantly persuaded me into your arms, with beautiful eyes and taunting words.
You elegantly placed me in another world. Sheerbliss was the planet name.
Alien skin of yellow and pink, blocking every tunnel with new found light.
You convinced me of you infallible care. I fell. I believed.
I gave something to you unintentionally.
The present brings us to something new. You with her. You.. did not do.
Did not do as in your actions. Not as in my standards.
Your actions leave you hollow.
Your words you happened to completely not follow.
I gave myself to you the day before you “destroyed a world.”
I mocked her when she used these terms.
Maybe ours was not a world. Maybe it was a rainbow? Yet, still beautiful and important in it’s own self-dignified way.
You destroyed it. You ruined it. It’s gone.
You went back to something that filtered out all joy and had only desperation left. She desperate for you; you desperate to be her only.
Mmmm how beautiful broken love can be.. Too bad it had to break me.
Now I’ve “moved on”, while you lay in her arms. Of your happiness I do not know, only the outside I see, only a show.
May it be real? Quite possibly. Is it you? I’ll never know.
I could ask, but that’s only unnecessary pain, when you may leave it be unknown, leave the question to remain.
I’m happy with someone else, I guess.
You’re the worst. You were my best.
You turned me into something else. Left me destroyed, once again.
You left me feeling worthless.
Here I am with someone new.. Yet here my words describe you.
It’s the pain that lasts a lifetime. Not the joy.
The pain that forever leaves the mark as freedom’s toy.
Goodbye now. I hope you feel it too.
I love you. Don’t tell.
It was too soon.


http://poeticinsanity.tumblr.com/
yeah idk my friend linked me to this.

lolkat
11-03-2009, 10:56 PM
fuhkin GAY

Audio.
11-03-2009, 11:04 PM
Hmmm I cant remember when BBMB had a poetry thread.

lolkat
11-03-2009, 11:09 PM
boning.
your mom,
amongst the azalea bushes.

the wind cuts through the brush like a pencil-dick.
teardrops on my ballsack.

mikizee
11-03-2009, 11:14 PM
boning.
your mom,
amongst the azalea bushes.

the wind cuts through the brush like a pencil-dick.
teardrops on my ballsack.

Thats beautiful man, just.... beautiful. *wipes tear*

Audio.
11-03-2009, 11:20 PM
boning.
your mom,
amongst the azalea bushes.

the wind cuts through the brush like a pencil-dick.
teardrops on my ballsack.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TylvUGJIi_w

cosmo105
11-04-2009, 02:47 AM
That poem and whole site is terrible.

Bob
11-04-2009, 02:52 AM
I froze your tears, and made a dagger
And stabbed it in my cock, forever
It stays there like Excalibur
Are you my Arthur?
Say you are.
Take this cool dark steeled blade
Steal it, sheathe it in your lake
I’d drown with you to be together
Must you breath? ‘Cause I need heaven.

paul jones
11-04-2009, 05:18 AM
Her boobs were like Ballons
silloueted in the moon
light

camo
11-04-2009, 08:20 AM
Bloody teens and their emo poems :rolleyes:

ToucanSpam
11-04-2009, 04:13 PM
Go look up real poetry like William Carlos William, Sylvia Plath, Ezra Pound, Gertrude Stein, Wallace Stevens, HD, and Ginsberg.


EDIT: Maybe not Pound, he was a Nazi sympathizer and you're obviously very young and impressionable

beastieboysbaby
11-04-2009, 05:57 PM
i hate these boards hahahah.

camo
11-04-2009, 06:48 PM
i hate these boards hahahah.

I like fruit banananana.

miss soul fire
11-04-2009, 08:32 PM
There's a way
of being gay
in the subway
but only in May...:p

TAL
11-05-2009, 09:09 PM
Shallow Life.

Drowning alone I gasp for air
Cold creeps over pale skin
There is sadness... so deep, it pulls me down
Happiness dies in the deep, dark sea.

Audio.
11-05-2009, 10:15 PM
Morning Boner.

thats poetic enough.