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Old 02-24-2015, 08:48 PM
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'just one more thing'
'ring the alarm' and the alarm will ring
gettin closer, my sonar will ping
found you guilty, yeah don't it just sting
'the entertainer', jsut wanna bring
some life to it, just like spring
say it lima charlie, the good news i sing
ish's turnin' around, ain't taht something

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Old 02-25-2015, 08:22 AM
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(columbo)
'just one more thing'
'ring the alarm', and the alarm will ring
gettin closer, my sonar pings
found you guilty, yeah don't it sting
'the entertainer', i wanna bring
life to it.. just like in spring
say it lima charlie when i'm 'duh, winning'
ish's turnin' around, now ain't taht something

some say i am, some say i'm not
if you figure it out, figure out the plot
stupid little lines, connect all the dots
draw a picture up and walk the art walk
you could say i got it, or that i got got
waht am i saying, did i miss a spot

ugh damn i feel flat
so i'ma dawn my thinking cap
tell it again or keep it under wraps
now i'm up to bat
the pitcher spat
'the natural', yep, i got it all down pat
'i am what i am' now how you like that

a new rhyme
something smart and sublime
read it now, it's on the line
make it flow, see the sign
make it so it defines all time
but you keep that up, you must be blind
this is where we're gonna find
a new frontier of the mind
star trek and mr. chris pine
...
guten morgen

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Old 02-26-2015, 11:09 AM
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guten morgen
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(columbo)
'just one more thing'
'ring the alarm', sum o dem sing
getting closer, my sonar pings
found you guilty, ain't that the sting
'the entertainer', i want to bring
life to it.. just like in spring
say it lima charlie when i'm 'duh, winning'
ish's turnin' around, now ain't taht something

some say i am, some say i'm not
if you can't figure it out, maybe you can figure out the plot
silly little lines, connect all the dots
draw a picture up then walk the art walk

so i'ma dawn my thinking cap
tell it again or keep it under wraps
now that i'm up, i'll take my bat
the pitcher spat
'the natural', lightning, i got it all down pat
'i am what i am' now how you like that

a new rhyme
something smart and sublime
read it now, it's on the line
make it flow, just see the signs
make it so it defines all time
but you keep that up, you must be blind
this is where we're gonna find
a new frontier of/ for the mind
the nines, star trek, and monsieur chris pine

'never stop rapping yet'
and i know three eleven so i have no regrets
you thought i'd stay quiet, but you lost all your bets
one way or another you're gonna pay off your debts

so let's finish on a high note shall we
i toke it right on up when im chillin out in maui
excuse me for a second, let me put together a finale

...

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Old 02-27-2015, 03:32 AM
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You might feel a little sting
That's pride fuckin' wit ya when I stick ya wit the ting
Might hit ya wit the ring
The shit is glittering
Off the gems thrown in on the deal with Mr Wing out in Tokyo
I got a smoking ho
Roll the lye, now I'm Pinnochio
Watch my tower rise like Rokoko
Ready to ravage, do some damage
Contemplating marriage while she carve the radish
I'm mannish
(Now get your nails out my back)



I'm going off, getting paid and I don't ask why

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Old 03-10-2015, 10:28 AM
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i deal
come around here you know i'ma serve it up real
don't get the puns, then don't get me started on another speel
this all rhymes and it appeals so
just back me up with that seal
of royalty? ... the people are the government and it's a steal
cuz you fumbled and you mumbled and you kill for your meal
living in the dark ages, now how do you really feel?
got that blood clot, it's time for us to heal
electrify this world with some cannabis, solar.. just until
we come full circle, get to the point, swallow the red pill
peace and prosperity, but you know it's all illl
that's all i got... but i'ma be here still
...

Last edited by ericg : 03-10-2015 at 12:24 PM. Reason: not a finalle but it'll hopefully come... i'm runnin on no inspiration
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Old 03-11-2015, 10:53 PM
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Fucked up and uncoordinated
Seems to me that rap today's been downgraded
Too much pop no heart hustle & muscle
Things that make you chuckle but you know should be muffled
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Old 03-12-2015, 10:52 AM
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looking at my notepad, what should write uh now its
time to bust a rhyme set the world alight
yeah my style's tight, rise above the shite
and if you wanna pull me down ain't gonna be tonite

please take a long walk you fuckin' hater
bater's gonna bate, ain't gonna bait the bater

now or later you'll hear kick boom pow!
your stock is goin' down, i'm gonna beat the Dow
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Old 03-12-2015, 11:13 AM
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i'm so sorry you had to read some of this... maybe only a small percentage of what i write should've been posted here... i only had one or two rhymes when i started.. i start here... and then i thought i'd edit everything here so you's could see.. but i'm not always up to... sorry.

however, some of these rhymes are getting published by page pubishing in nyc which is really cool i guess. if anyone knows about that or literary agents, let me know. i haven't written much about ad rock and to be quite honest, i can't seem to come up with anything cool enough or in his league to write.. like yauch and mike, he's just so cool, so..
'caution to the wind' ...

ad rock!
got it on lock
galvanized the world with an electric shock
maintains all the love from around the block
chalks it all up, 'oh, word!?!', when he talks
you know it's gonna be from the best of stocks
gettin time's right as he tick n he tocks

'live long and prosper' like mr. spock

'sittin on the dock of the bay'
'around the world in 80 days'
let me get through this maze
the mind's an abyss, alien subconcious lay
so what can i say
still blows my mind, russian roullette

get french up in here too, or spanish, odelay
it's okay
seize the day
come and play

mca will always be around ... we'll never lose his way..!!!
the energy was too noble an element to ever really be gone from space
it all really mattered, he showed us how to rise from grace
there's more than meets the eye in this earthly place
'what the fuck do we know?' will we ever bring the case?
wake up in the mix when i start these effing days

'date.. relate'
so much at stake
get the time's right, so we're not so late

.. that wasn't.... sorry
i'll move things around and try again later on a better day. i gotta go.

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